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Poem Number 23008
The wind complicates
the takeoff of a departing airline
The wind complicates
a first down pass past the 30 yard line
The wind complicates
a passing storm only to build it's intensity
The wind complicates
the calmness of the swirling sea
The wind complicates
the wind, in twirling streams of cool and hot,
and tornadoes are born
in the mouths of men.
The wind complicates
a banner unfurling, anouncing
a nation or some situation
in which someone will lose and someone will win
The wind complicates
a long walk home, intense though
a cold spring day without warning
The sun is no harbor, from the cold nature of his diagnosis
Commentary:
Anyone care add a complication? Eyeswidopen
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one line spacing between refrains isn't so nice.
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I don't really like how this poem starts but it gains momentum, the idea behind this poem is actually quite cleaver. ))))))))))Peacefrog
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