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Poem Number 22994
totally unintelligible
Commentary:
So my procrastination met my procrastination, and I was left standing
beside you, but you were walking out already, because I had arrived late
and the party has barely begun,
but everyone is already tired
I'm rather fatigued myself,
but hardly have I expired
so I rise up, greet morning
like the sun
spent the whole night
talking to his son
Why, I never know,
just a thing to do
after everyone goes,
he's always
the last one
standing in the room
blessed be, but cursed am
god,
dam up all emotions
and try not to let the levees
explode
but swimming deep within
the ancient lakes
of yesterday
there is a swimming thing
a fish so strange
darwin couldn't explain
I shake my head,
tell my tale,
even I can't believe
what I'm saying
even I can't believe
I'm praying
but then again,
she won't return my calls
-o-
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totally
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