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Poem Number 22941
New Baby
Commentary:
Welcome to this world.
You did not ask for it.
But you're here anyway.
So do the best you can.
Mommy wants you to succeed
in all the things she flunked.
Daddy wants some cheap labor
for his out-of-date business.
Grow up quick before
he ends up in bankruptcy.
You can make tons of money
in this new world of yours.
When you die you can't take
a penney of what you made
to the other world.
Welcome here anyway.
-_- Claude
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Good job. There is such a bleak outlook for children today. It's very sad. Much to think about. ms
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Thoughtful comment, ms. Thank you for reading the poem. -_- Claude
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The outlook has always been bleak, though, hasn't it? And hasnt' it always been a unasked for gift, a wonderful adventure of beuaty and discovery?
sg
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closed 12-17
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Let's hope he doesn't make tons of money, but can find true joy in living in a world which could be beautiful if people loved one another.
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