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Poem Number 22908
Charlie Rock
Commentary:
a mellow smokiness,
like a wine was boisterous
The tempering process imparts sharpness
I am singing under a hammer, red hot and ready.
Lactic acid burns less than acquiesence,
drives the mind higher, the body faster.
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I miss her like breathing.
Roiling water in a pot,
nothing to do but scald
empty like the sky over highways and wheatfields
I hurtle blindly forward,
towards self destruction, war and isolation.
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Raven haired beauty,
perched on god's telephone,
clutching a beer I don't
recognize
down in australia alone.
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A mellow smokiness-
like a wine was boisterous.
The tempering process imparts sharpness
I am singing under a hammer, red hot and ready.
Lactic acid burns less than acquiescence,
drives the mind higher, the body faster.
-------
I miss her like breathing.
Roiling water in a pot,
nothing to do but scald
empty like the sky over highways and wheat fields
I hurtle blindly forward,
towards self destruction, war and isolation.
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