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Poem Number 22900
22900
Commentary:
that morning
you sat beside me
and i lay in the
crook of your arm,
and you placed an arm around me
and i never felt so safe
so *loved*
and i want to
be there with you
wake with you
in the mornings,
sleep with you
in the evenings
and i will wait,
i wil wait for you
when this cannot be
i will wait and dream of
you
for you, you are
my great love
þ
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I like this. I its simplicity--the feelings it evokes...well done! JFC
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very sweet! the first stanza .. i'm lucky enough to enjoy. the second part ... i'm thankful not to be waiting & dreaming. it's a reality. great piece! Drm
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