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the taste
and touch and smell of you
is hiding behind
the highway.
i want to reach out
with thousand mile arms
and pull you home.


)Kaleb
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I like how direct this is, but why not touch upon these other senses (taste, touch, smell) we don't usually read about in poems? I do like the last three lines, they kind of break your heart in a way, I wouldn't change them. Just a thought though. -Jesse
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Oh my, this is excellent. Jane
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The only word that gives me pause is "behind" I would have used beyond...I don't know why.for sure...
You express a universal longing ;good job!
Leti
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It's nice because it feels like the person is *just* unreachable... sad really.