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Poem Number 22830
The Art of Rejection
Commentary:
My head is pounding
twenty rivers out of existence
just knowing
your hazel flavored eyes
will never be mine
and not to mention
the fact that you so gracefully
dance around double negatives
just to appease the brutal honesty
that I bring
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Good effect in a few lines. Lowell
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I love "hazel flavored eyes". Great line. ms
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A short poem that reads a mile long. I too love hazel flavored eyes))))Peacefrog
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"hazel flavored eyes" what a yummy description but what hit home for me were the following:
" you so gracefully
dance around double negatives
just to appease the brutal honesty ...." ... Drm
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