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Poem Number 22816
I only paint dancers, he said
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long, straight and elegant
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pale, porcelain skin, flawless
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with a hint of rose upon their lips
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A masterpiece
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they glide effortlessly
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across the canvas
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I stand in awe of their grace
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Their beauty absorbed by the brush
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each stroke I take
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leaves me breathless
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~~~~~
---ms
Commentary:
The power of women introduced in poem form, I like it. Peacefrog
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degas' works are amazing!!! i'm not particularly crazy about that time in art --- impressionism --- but there are a few that stuck out like degas, renoir, manet, monet. btw, enjoyed the poem! Drm
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i think women have powers other than perfect skin.
the shift in perspective between the painter and the breathless is interesting, but confusing.
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Painting Degas' work with delft verse strokes--fresh new angle. Good job ~ Jim
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