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Poem Number 22801
how to untangle my love?
Commentary:
how to untangle my love?
under tangled wires sits
the corrupt confusion of flesh,
while those birds fly free against a grey sky,
flat as the noise from the street, and
`
i'm in the eye of the storm.
but the confusion is my own...
`
-if freedom is founded on choices,
then they are choices within a whirlpool
and we are the centre-
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from here i'm trying to listen to the song of myself
but it is soft and slow and
i've no time:
`
how to untangle my love before
pain untangles my love from
flesh.
`
raul.
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