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Poem Number 22535
The gifted child
---Anonymous
wears a helmet
---Anonymous
does he think he is going to catch a pike?
---Anonymous
Is he ready to jump on his bike?
---Anonymous
My mom tells me he is slow
---Anonymous
I put spiders in his mailbox
---Anonymous
I hope he doesn't know
---Anonymous
His mom is a real fox
---Anonymous


Commentary:
One word, out-of-sight! I enjoyed the comparison of spiders in the mail box to Japan's current economic debate. BRILLIANT
-Herschel Timebug
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This is a very good poem. I like the way the viewpoint of the small boy is written. It seems to be the sorts of reflections of an actual child. If it is written by one he should be encouraged, by an english teacer or something. ~Cooker
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