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Poem Number 22489
Time
tIme
tiMe
timE
TIMMEE! DINNER'S READY!
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I'll meet you there
Just wait for me
You won't be alone long.
I'll take a cab
and jog the last
You won't be standing long.
If I am late
Save a seat
You won't be turned looking long.
If I don't show
Then I am dead
You won't be crying long.
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There is something about this poem that I find really attractive. I got a sense of bittersweet deja vu. This is simple, but quite intriguing. Nicely done Cass. -Jesse.
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