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Poem Number 22370
I live in a land of darkness
Dark cloudy gray morning
Chilled empty night
Rearrangement of time an hour behind
I lost my sol
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I live in a land of hunger
Summer bobbing on lil waves
Airborne corpse rot fetid hot
Tug of the pole, snap of the line
I lost my sole
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I live in a land of aliens
North and South opposition
Eco-political-militant forces
Uprooted with no home to find
I lost my Seoul
Commentary:
Much taken from much posted above -dave
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Interesting approach and good read. VI
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