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Poem Number 22029
And
the
it
went
2000 ton chocolate pygmy gopher
and unwrapped cheese
spoiling in the sunlight of a summer day
Commentary:
is the time to start
now I have no more
words to quiet
my mind my
riot mind
do not mind I
no I don't
the time to listen
to find the time
look here here
look slowly it
is time is mine
it is
beautiful the quiet
is it me and mine
are running the coward
clock oh no never
stop eternity and we
look keep looking are not
the words beautiful very
and so very nice
to presume immortality
you and I who are we
little things but stars
so they are to our
perception and words
what are they to be heard
but and so very nice and
beautiful when eternity
they presume with never
life ending and always
more of everything and
forever something more and
INZANE
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this is very compelling, inzane. it's good to see you're still writing. *grace
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