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Are you the one who is selling me out
tell me I am nothing
and I'll crawl away
I'll look for something in between your lies
but then I came to realize
I never had anything at all
these changes taking place
make me wonder is it me thats selling me out

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There is nothing like a poem that describes experience. In shop class they made us write:
Knowlege is Power
Will is Power
Experience is Power
I guess there are three powers. Nice powerful poem. ~Cooker
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alot of times we find ourselves doing these things over and over.
it is sad really. I would know because I guess I can't seem to stop
doing it no matter how much I know in my heart of hearts what is really
going on. But I am just a mess. Anyways.. It's a great poem.
~Lady Jazmin
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Rubbish.
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Rubbish? Please explain.
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can't find the meaning in it.
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the meaning? the meaning is that change is inevitable. I really didn't think when I wrote this it just kinda came out of me, not everything has to make sense or having meaning...just like life sometimes. -Jesse
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there is always one a$$hole in every crowd that tries to bring us down.
I found the meaning. I thought it was very good. -anon
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well thank you anon I'm glad you found meaning in this. -Jesse
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