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Poem Number 20691
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Whispers shatter mirrors
Commentary:
sometimes and always
i sit thinking of
the comfortable way
of us,
the way you make me feel
(calm)/(excited)/(eager)
and i wish that i could
blink myself into the places that
you are, close my eyes
quickly and open
them to you and your
fragrance,
your eyes, (soft)
your hands, (a perfect fit)
and all of it, all of you,
all of me...
all of a whisper that
you breath in my ear
exploding my world
into silence...and of course breathing.
)Kaleb
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sometimes and always
i sit thinking of
the comfortable way
of us,
the way you make me feel
(calm)/(excited)/(eager)
and i wish that i could
blink myself into the places that
you are, close my eyes
quickly and open
them to you and your
fragrance,
your eyes, (soft)
your hands, (a perfect fit)
and all of it, all of you,
all of me...
all of a whisper that
you breath in my ear
exploding my world
into silence...and of course breathing.
)Kaleb
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