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Poem Number 20681
anot(her) sunset
Commentary:
backlight rolls around
and i catchmy shadow running
smooothly across the paneling;
.
quiet and smoky.
.
(best sound
no sound)
.
alone and scary.
.
can hear the heat searing the horizon
setting behind me.
.
sweat and silence.
.
and
slowly shadow fades, deep blue
invades, sneaky breeze over my
shoulder turns trees gem green.
.
pushes down light
.
pushes down light source,
out with warmth.
.
.
cooling calms.
12-12-02
-jerry
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line two should read 'catch my'.
-jerry
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I like this one...very descriptive. -- Phenom*
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