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Poem Number 20670
Broken glass.
Commentary:
Broken glass shatters
just like my heart did...
How far will you push and test me?
My love will fade away as quickly as it came,
it will if you strike me again,
A doll breaks
just like it's little heart...
What's left within this doll?
Only heartbreak and sadness
because you don't even love me
and i feel like a fool because
i can't even refuse most of the time!
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FINIT
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Written by ~~Rose
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there was supposed to be a stanza break before the line A doll breaks..
supposed to be 2 stanzas one before the dolls breaks and one after that.
Hope this helps the readers.
~~Rose
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