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Poem Number 20659
Rain in Caye Caulker
Commentary:
Love me though I am weak with jealousy,
singing aloud to me in c sharp minor.
The doubt but a mirror, my love like snow
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Melts in the sun’s image, winter has no place
in that sandy palace, malice is not her
intent but another, trust found in voyages
.......
delivered into her cusps, soft pedals
pulled from vessels nestled in lonely harbors,
Drops of water, melting from jealousy’s clasps,
.......
Falling in her foreign skies, a thawing emotion.
Falling in her foreign skies, a sulking devotion.
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it should be titled, rain in dangria, my misinformation...perry neuser.
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Wondrful title. Wonderful poem. I couldn't wait to get to the end to see you the poet was. Love "singing aloud to me in C sharp minor." Many would have written a cliche like "singing to me a sad song." Talent, man, talent. write more and put on the site.
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