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Poem Number 20616
Frozen Lemonade


Commentary:
I felt a drop
i thought it was rain
felt so cold
upon my brow
i stomped my feet
onto the concrete
i won't look up for now
cause in my mind
it's summertime
yeah, it's summertime easy
I can feel the sun so hot
the air it is so breezy
but once again
i feel small hands
with ice cold finger tips
tilt up my face
strait up to space
the snow it touches my lips
but in my mind
i'm doin' fine
i've got enough to eat
a comb for my hair
clean underwear
and a place for my child to sleep
i know the sun
brings laughs brings fun
but winter comes too quick
i sit here and shiver
I can not deliver
what I don't have
what doesn't exist
but in my mind it's summertime
it's summertime easy
in my mind it's summer time
and the air is warm and breezy
I felt a drop
i thought it was rain
felt so cold
upon my brow
i stomped my feet
onto the concrete
i won't look up for now
no, i won't look up for now
no
i won't look up for now
i won't look up for now, no
i won't look up for now
i won't look up
i won't look up
i won't look up for now
for now

i won't look up for now
no
i won't look up for now.
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-in2thefreezer
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Emotions from an interesting vantage point = Ben
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