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Poem Number 20607
my day


Commentary:
forgiveness burns
inky words on crispy
molten pages
and my spirit wiggles
breaking the shell
of hatred
of denial
and protection
that has formed there
for so long
like a baby bird
poking thru the darkness
looking for the light
i watch three stories
float up the chimney
nothing but smoke now
and shriveled ashes
in the fireplace
finally free
of the weight
my wet wings unfold
and I am hungry
for life
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nice descriptions. feed that hunger! Drm
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Cleansing of a state of mind in a good analogy = Ben
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