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Poem Number 20561
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i see you
when you are not looking
my way
i crave you when i should
never
crave you that way
i imagine your skin
and it 's wrong for me to
but i can't help it
this wanting
of you
i watch how your muscles
move under your skin
i watch your lips
your cheeks
your chin
i think of bad things
that feel good inside
i can still see you
when you try to hide
cause you don't really mean it
and can i see you
looking at me
when i look away
you crave me
when you should
never, ever
crave me that way
you imagine my skin
and it's wrong for you to
but you can't help it
you're wanting me too
you watch how my muscles
move under my skin
you watch my lips
my cheeks
my chin
you think of bad things
that feel good inside
and you can still see me
when i try to hide
but you know i don't mean it
because you can see me
looking at you
looking at me

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wonderfully tense! well written too
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thanks! I wrote it on the spot, right here-it just came out without any thought. after i read it i thought it was kind of funny for some reason. dorky a little.
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read this one many times. You create a very intense longing...it has an aching, even painful, appeal. ~obscured
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