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Poem Number 20271
Roses
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Roses bloom
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and just as quickly break
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Roses rest
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in my tired hands
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Red petals fall one by one
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until the beautiful Rose is left
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empty and lonely at the core....
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This Rose is left slowly wilting away
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because her first love left her and
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because no one could ever
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ever replace him...
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Four dreary and cloudy years have passed
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and he still stands fresh
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in her memmory lane
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True love can never be replaced
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nor ever forgotten.
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Written by ~~Rose
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Commentary:
Rose, you are back. You are really young. Your poetry lacks any depth.
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Good imagery and lovely comparison. K2
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Rose ... keep writing and provoking thought... intelligence does not require age ... psichore
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a pretty parallel between the flower and the girl. nicely done, rose. *grace
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