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Poem Number 19814
Its darker now than ever
---Anonymous
But he says he'll still be there
---Anonymous
When the night is over
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Even though I feel him
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Already slipping away
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Yet, I don't know how to pull him
---Anonymous
Back to my heart
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Without crushing all that we've built
---Anonymous
Throughout us.
---Anonymous
Commentary:
I really like this and it grips me, but I'm at a loss on how to comment to it. It has a good strength to it. :) Rae
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This poem is screaming sadness. It's well expressed. ms
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