Its darker now than ever
But he says he'll still be there
When the night is over
Even though I feel him
Already slipping away
Yet, I don't know how to pull him
Back to my heart
Without crushing all that we've built
Throughout us.

I really like this and it grips me, but I'm at a loss on how to comment to it. It has a good strength to it. :) Rae
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This poem is screaming sadness. It's well expressed. ms