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Poem Number 19725
Christian Slave.
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Christian messenger ---I will be
I am so full of Christian and Jewish faith, that i could burst.....
My faith will never fade
Will my faith just bring me ever more closer to death?
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With all my faith I know he'll never truly love me
He'll toy with and he'll just break my heart
I lost my heart
on the damn first day that i saw him.....
I gave him my heart the first time
I gave him my heart the first time
(typo)
that i laid my eyes upon him....
But i can manage somehow without him
But i can manage somehow without him
I don't need anyone to save me
not even him.....
Only his affection
Only his admiration
One kiss
That's all it will take
And I'll always be his
always!
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~~Rose
Commentary:
My precious...
precious is...a dichotomy...how can she be both christian and jewish? servile and independent? Precious does not understand...
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Precious when you don't understand something fully, that does not make it right for you to close my poems down, Precious.
Now listen lil precious girly, if you don't understand my poems fullily, just ask kindly about what i meant in the poem, ask civil questions, i don't mind that at all...But do not close my poems down just because you don't understand.
That's not nice, ask anyone.
PS. How would you feel if I closed your poems down? Would you enjoy that? Answer honestly, and next time just ask me about my poems, ask instead of closing them down.
2nd P.S. You know something, i will just reinstate it back. No problem.
I'll just post it again. You think i can't? LOL.
~~Rose.
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