The Interactive Poetry Pages

Aha! Poetry


View poem without authors
Aha! Poetry Top Page
Poem Number 19716
Shattered broken glass
---Anonymous
--
---Anonymous
Shattered broken pieces
---Anonymous
of the glass lie on the cold floor
---Anonymous
Torn flowers fell
---Anonymous
and shattered slowly
---Anonymous
from the shock of
---Anonymous
this cold metallic society
---Anonymous
--
---Anonymous
Bronze doll tries to pull the flowers
---Anonymous
back together
---Anonymous
petal by petal
---Anonymous
piece by piece
---Anonymous
She wants to make them alive again
---Anonymous
and to have something
---Anonymous
to put back
---Anonymous
into her purple vase...
---Anonymous
--
---Anonymous
This doll tries to pull them
---Anonymous
back together in vain
---Anonymous
Flowers are not immortal
---Anonymous
once the petals broke
---Anonymous
once they wilted
---Anonymous
there is no going back....
---Anonymous
--
---Anonymous
They can't be pieced back together,
---Anonymous
just like innocence that is lost brutally
---Anonymous
can never be regained
---Anonymous
never
---Anonymous
--
---Anonymous
Once blindness and innocence is lost
---Anonymous
Only a cynical and cold heart remains
---Anonymous
in the rubble of endless memmories of
---Anonymous
innocent days spent so long ago...
---Anonymous
the dusty shaded memmories of
---Anonymous
love that was built and of love lost
---Anonymous
haunt me still
---Anonymous
to this day
---Anonymous
--
---Anonymous
Blood will drip
---Anonymous
His blood will flow...his first, then mine
---Anonymous
He'll get killed by his adversaries and rivals
---Anonymous
And then my nemises will come after me too
---Anonymous
What will their chess move be?
---Anonymous
No action? Imprisonment? Or much worse?
---Anonymous
We are both cursed
---Anonymous
in many ways
---Anonymous
But there is a shining star light left
---Anonymous
Christ will lead me upon the right path
---Anonymous
Christ died for all our sins
---Anonymous
Christ will piece back my flowers' petals
---Anonymous
Christ will forgive him too, if he only truly repents....
---Anonymous
Christ will lead me to the right way
---Anonymous
--
---Anonymous
Innocence can never
---Anonymous
be salvaged again
---Anonymous
Once you loose it
---Anonymous
You can never be the same
---Anonymous
never never again.
---Anonymous
--
---Anonymous
_____________________________
---Anonymous
~~Rose
---Anonymous


Commentary:
I liked the picture you were pieceing (sorry I can't spell sometimes) together up until the whole Christ thing.. I'm just not a big religious person. But I found it thought provoking and most likely one of your best poems so far.
~~Alexis
-------
Thanks for your kind comments, Alexis. I don't know if it's one of the best of my poems so far, but i tried hard to make it interesting. I like many of your poems too. Thanx again. ~~Rose.
Add to commentary


Unless specifically noted otherwise, copyrights for all lines entered belong to the authors only.
View poem without authors
Return to current poems in progress.
Completed Poems.
Aha! Poetry Top Page
Send a general comment to the web author, or view some of the comments left by others.
Thanks in advance for any feedback you can pass on.
Disruption report - Please choose this link to report any disruptive or offensive entries, or closing sprees, if they appear. Thank you.

Brought to you by Ann Cantelow.