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Poem Number 19293
Follow Thru
Commentary:
yeah, he's good for you
but I'd die for you
it's what you want
but is it what you need
why can't you just see
you can have something
or you can have more
in me
why didn't you
just follow thru
it could have been so easy
why didn't you
just follow thru
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this is really good...especially the first two lines, like the opening to a song.
)Kaleb
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the whole thing really sounds ilke a song.. i like it. *teyie
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This poem wins a thumbs up for it simplicity. What you see is what you get. Pure simple feeling.
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