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Poem Number 19275
As long as the stars beckon
Commentary:
Tethered tight to
this tensely weeded world
in a place where
words no longer have a sound
a cyclone rests ill at ease
Because every place
he ever goes
looks like every place
he’s ever been
and he has
too much of the cosmos
in his soul
to ever be content
with existing in this
earthbound realm
as long as
the stars beckon
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thank you for posting this...*grace
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i'm all about the words, and the words here are awesome...i love the first line. You have to have a great first line..and you do!
)Kaleb
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i'm all about the words, and the words here are awesome...i love the first line. You have to have a great first line..and you do!
)Kaleb
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i love everything. every owrds had me hanging waiting for more. *teyie
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Excellently done. Like capturing a rare sight and showing us photos. Reminds me of 'Stormchasers'
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Thank you all for reading and commenting.
Nigh Eve
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