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Poem Number 18946
rebirth
.
recapture the days
weepy with smiles
her and I float along
in the yellow submarine
pushing forward, pushing through
webs that sting red eyes
the past recedes into ripples
as waves sigh and subside
crack open the hatch, she says
I want to see the sun
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Commentary:
Dragonfly, this says so much! Change is often painful but needful to see the sun! Enjoyed! ~Linda
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good imagery and metaphor. ms
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