I am feasting,
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Drinking down deep
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pools of your eyes
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relishing each taste
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of lips, of lips,
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of your breath
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Who could believe
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the sweetness
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skin conceals?
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I can smell you,
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drifting through
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the air like fresh
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baked bread,
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making my eyes
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water with
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raw hunger.
---Cor

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~~Cor~~
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i really like this Cor, it has a "raw" beauty.
)Kaleb
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mmmm I read somewhere that the smell of baking bread etc. can be more of a "sensual turn on " for the male than a store bought perfume. Interesting to see you have portrayed it that way in your poem. :-) ~ audee