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Poem Number 18788
You said you want to end it all
No one alive's worth living for
look at the Monarch butterfly
flitting from daisy to flower

Isn't that worth another day
How about that crimson sunset
you have a date with every Fall
Never broken that one before

For others you've always lived
If not for yourself, how about
staying on little longer for me


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babylon9@webtv.net



Commentary:
Now, this one I like and I could almost repeat that previous poem 18782 here in thanks, for such things, only I don't steal poems. B:)
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Thank you, B, for the informative feedback // BHS
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Sometimes we need those little reminders to keep us going. Good job. ms
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ms, yes sometimes we do lose sight of the good side of life that tells us to hang in there // BHS
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end May ten
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