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Poem Number 18619
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---Jesse
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alone in a moment
i fall behind
staring at the sun before I go blind
let the wind blow me across the open field
until the rain falls over my body
I stand alone into this world
its all overated
in its own little way
I still have a million questions on my mind
only the past tense one's to find
until there is nothing left
until nothing matters at all
we get so angry at all in life
many sterio-types
good point so I see
you'll never understand me
-Jesse
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"....this world, it's all overrated" very true -Ed
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No one completely understands anyone, even our own selves but I think there is plenty in life that matters if we look in the right directions!
Linda
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do you linda?
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Linda, what do you think of whispering ghosts asking questions, from behind curtains, trees or walls? Can you find them a nice name like yours? Kevin
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Yes, Jesse I do! Even though you may be going through a rough stage in your life, 5 years, 2 years, even 1 year from now you will feel differently! Loved ones matter, children matter, doing kindnesses for others matter, fulfilling our inner dreams matter (such as writing, painting or anything we have an interest in) and we matter, not because of what we can get out of life but what we can give! Your work reflects a quality in you that is both sensitive and caring, with remarkable insight. You have a lot to give and a lot to receive, just give life time! :) Linda
Kevin, your question is a confusion to me! I am not sure I understand what or why you are asking? Ghosts or appearance of ghosts are a mystery to all but I am not sure if you are speaking of "real"(I use that term loosely) ghosts or our "inner" ghosts that haunt our happiness and peace of mind. As far as names I think any respectable ghost would prefer a name unlike mine, one that has a mysterious and haunting quality. :) Linda
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linda. i think the ghost he's talking about is a reference to your annoyingly anonymous questioner. -rougefly
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Oh yes, I didn't see that! I just assumed the question was posted by Jesse! Sorry for being so dense! Linda
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