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Poem Number 18489
a happy poem
---Jesse
Commentary:
dance around,
frolick in the flowers
hold your smile over due
belive in love with out seeing it
as the wind or God belive in it
sing your soft sweet songs that carey you on
hold your head up high and don't look down,
look up at the mid night sky
wish upon all that you want not need
sleep with sweet dreams of all you know
and write your soul out word for word
but it wont be a happy poem.
-jesse
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wow...jesse, i must admit to being impressed with this one. i was startled by the last line. well done. *grace
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i agree....some awesome lines, and i love the ending.
)Kaleb
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Great poem, Jesse! :) -- Phenom*
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I think this one of your best! Linda/L(sm)
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im confused, what does it mean??
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sadness lives in us no matter what
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