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Poem Number 17451
Dreadful cosmic mistake they made
telling us that Sharon Galaxy
was twelve billion light years away
Then Big Brains come to their senses
and find out the simple stark truth
It's only ten billion light years
from you and me in our little world
I'm now very happy about it
I thought I would never get there!
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Commentary:
"The Break Of dawn"
The sun peeks in her eyes
shimmers off her hair
bursts into sunshine in her smile
This is the "Break of Dawn"
Her laughter brightens my day
her love and tenderness warms my heart
her hot touch burns my flesh
This is the "Break of Dawn"
The birds sing in her voice
her tears are the soft fall of rain
her whisper in my ear is the gentle
slow breeze of morning
This is "The Break of Dawn"
The peace I feel when I'm in her arms
the touch of her lips and the feel
of her skin strenghtens me like the
morning sun to a flower
This is "The Break of Dawn"
My days can not begin
my nights are not complete
my world stands still
...Until...
"The Break of Dawn"
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CLee
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