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Poem Number 16650
Owl hides in the tree
Rising moon shines the spotlight
Nervous birds flap wings
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Is poem Haiku, or high cuckoo cuckoo? Comment anyway; I promise not to sue! ... Wally
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I love the feeling this gives me. I can see it, hear it. R.J.G.
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You no sue? ok then: it's doo doo.
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Anon, your comment resembles the doo doo of a dodo --call it dodo's doo doo. - Oliver
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one thing I would suggest Wally.... try not to have breaks at the end of each line, link either the first and second or second and third...the images are great. You've stuck to concrete pictures with no metaphors, enjoyed the clear image it gave me.....alice:))
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R.J.G, Glad you liked the haiku. Oliver,thank you for the "Voo doo you do". Alice, your helpful comment is appreciated. Anon, my lawyer advises not to hand you a suit--stay naked! ... Wally
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