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Poem Number 16648
falling
Commentary:
i think im falling...
into white carpet and pillow fights
into bass guitars and heavy metal
into blankets and tickling sessions
i think im falling for you.
~
it seems absurd
that i could feel for another
but here i am
longing for your voice
and the touch
that soothes all my worries
i never thought...
but you mean so much
~
i couldn't ask for much more
than to sit in your arms
to never be let go
to feel your heart race
to look at your face
i think you need to know
~
im falling for you
~Alexis
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well done with nice imagery. ms
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well stated, it captures all the feelings of love.
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