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Poem Number 16605
Depths of You
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And still
there are depths of you
yet to be discovered in our succulent
savory hours of intimacy and pleasure. Our lovemaking has
never grown insipid, with always a new fantasy creeping round, and
a new craving sprouting up; no thorn has ever jabbed through
our coverlets of down; through decades of time we are
never the same; after all this time, we continue to
be each others' best voyagers; nothing
ever has had the
chance
to
become
threadbare; my beloved
husband, my lover, the most unique to me;
my heart's tender dale, my companion, sweetest mystery;
I love all the wandering corridors of your shifting motley emotions
and the velvet tongued fire-lit museums of your mind; I love
your lively underground meandering streams of stark
feelings flowing; and the fragrant woodland
campfires of our passions' blaze.
I love who you are deep
inside. I love
you.
~ ~ ~
R.J.G.


Commentary:
Your love burns hot, R.! Even i was warmed by it. i hope your mate understands if i've taken a bit of the flame for myself...fallon
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I love the shape of this. The ebb and flow of emotions during a relationship, during lovemaking... just what it did for me :).. A gorgeous poem R.J.G. ~ alice
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I don't know if I should sneak in here... But honey you do burn me up... prayers and much loving... your husband... DWG
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Oh, and Fallon...
not to worry my friend... understanding is something we know well... take what you can... your a friend to RJ. I visit often here but I don't respond to very many. But your one of my wife's favorites... I've read your works... I don't think I need to tell you... excellent, but just in case I will. God bless...
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dale wayne gwaltney
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Dale, how very good to meet you. Rosemary's poetry tells us all how special you are. And i now know you to be magnanimous as well. i also enjoyed your verse under H's poem. Blessings to you Dale and thank you...f
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I love the depths the second stanza reaches into. Nice one RJG. ~ audee
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You are a lucky man dale. cem
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astoundingly beautiful poem in every way imaginable!!!!!!
whoa.... even the commentary has my heart pounding.
~haizey
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