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Poem Number 16604
untold in secureties


Commentary:
somethings i feel aren't right
but you never know why
and sometimes ive even cried
but you don't know aboutt that night
i could tell you now
but it just wouldn't be the same
i need you when it happens
tell me who to blame
im sad until you're here
and when you're here im fine
some things i dont tell
for they're untold in security
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this doesn't feel right because how i feel won't come out straight in words. help is very much appreciated. ~alexis
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yes, this one is trying very hard to be born, isn't it? Relax Alice, it will come, loud and kicking...fallon
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I agree with fallon - !!!!! R.J.G.
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a good expression of "uncertainty", ~ audee
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