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Poem Number 16589
Menage
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three-headed monster
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we
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flailing surging caught
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in insect bliss,
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segmented, whole,
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Holy we three gritting
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teeth twitching six slender legs
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into the thorax-hum
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of skin and bone and groan
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there is no
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untangling this beauty,
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this beast,
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this shuddering breathless
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dragonfly dance
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Commentary:
The title is 'Menage'. This is a first draft. Any suggestions for a rewrite? Willow.
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Interesting 'mouse' thrown into a 'cat' site ~ Lowell
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I love this the way it is. Pure poetry. You do a great job of balancing the sensual beauty and the raw sexual animal urge. -jeffh
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concur with above comment...exquisite!....alice
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Fascinating. Story of a three-some love affair? Well, very intriguing, whether I'm wrong or right. Well written and strong. R.J.G.
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