Menage

three-headed monster
we
flailing surging caught
in insect bliss,
segmented, whole,
Holy we three gritting
teeth twitching six slender legs
into the thorax-hum
of skin and bone and groan

there is no
untangling this beauty,
this beast,
this shuddering breathless
dragonfly dance
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The title is 'Menage'. This is a first draft. Any suggestions for a rewrite? Willow.
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Interesting 'mouse' thrown into a 'cat' site ~ Lowell
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I love this the way it is. Pure poetry. You do a great job of balancing the sensual beauty and the raw sexual animal urge. -jeffh
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concur with above comment...exquisite!....alice
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Fascinating. Story of a three-some love affair? Well, very intriguing, whether I'm wrong or right. Well written and strong. R.J.G.