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Poem Number 16568
SunBurn
Commentary:
Skin peels aways...
layers of life
scraped raw
with heavy fingers...
the cold water
brings flames
of pain, burning
a hole of majestic
truth that
pain is still
prevalant.
My skin aches,
itches, screams
at me to purify
it with cold
aloe...the value
is lost between
the sun and
the redness
on the back of
my neck.
Csmith
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It has been awhile, glad to see some great stuff still going on here.Csmith
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Very well written! It's great to have you back Csmith, I look forwrd to reading your postings.~Silhouette
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ouch...can't say i've ever felt the pain but now i've imagined it ~grins~!!
so glad to see you Csmith :)
~haizey
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ohhhh how true! *grace
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