I may be very ill in bed
but I am not ready to die
there's still balance in my bank account
at least thats what they said

Put in your verses as you wish - Bud
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Very succinctly put, this poem evokes feelings of positivity in terms of you as the author and it also is somewhat reflective of society and its materialism. It shows particularly how society has chosen to associate a positive approach to life with monetry gains.

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anon - Thank you for an incisive comment. Still hoping for added lines, but time is short - Bud
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Life seems to have passed me by
and I find myself saying,
" I'm no ready for 'goodbye' "
Give me another chance
to right my wrongs
to leave behind smiles
.... where I once belong.
- E -
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thoughted it to late to be flower in my hand i forget o.