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Poem Number 16500
My demeanor wears like deodorant
Frowning knocks out my super fragrance
They walk around me as though my face
is one big hairy smelly underarm
Cloud of sweaty aroma follows me
in sweltering summer days; I smile at the folks
Faces light up, and move in close to chat
like I'm flaunting their favorite perfume
read it twice...i get it and i like it..it is so true
Commentary:
Add or comment to your heart's content. Thanks. = BHS
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Interesting analogy ~ Howie
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didnt mean to put it there..my first time sorry..i really like it
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Howie, thanks for the feedback. Poetess (philly), your kind comment is appreciated, wherever it is. = BHS
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