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Poem Number 16493
Your Smile
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Your Smile
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Your smile,
the picture
of your soul,
is like a mirage
of daffodils,
silently
trumpeting
to my heart a
song as happy
as the day is sunny,
holding the joy
of the morning
song of
warbling magpie.
Lifting me in
happiness,
more acutely
alerting me to
the blessings
passing my way.
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audee
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So sweet audee~
)Kaleb
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"a mirage of daffodils....holding the joy of the morning..." wow, audee, I wanna feel just like this,lol, will be looking for smiles when i get to work! great lines. thanks for posting this. flicker
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A smile, a daffodil, a magpie or poem, whatever can alert us to life's beauties, are precious in their own right. An excellent poem Audee...fallon
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Thank you very much Kaleb, Flicker and fallon for your very nice comments, they are much appreciated. :-) ~ audee
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Love it audee. cem
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your poem transports me Audee...it's wonderful here, i wanna stay :)
~haizey
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cem, haizey, glad it gave you a smile . :-D) thanks for you kind comments. ~ audee
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