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Poem Number 16337
A rose
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Blood red velvet
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Flushed with expectation
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My eyes close upon it's secrets
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I breathe in the silken promises
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Contained within
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A web of language
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Intricately weaved
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To capture and delight
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Caressing my senses
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Exciting my emotions
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More than all the glory that fills
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The evening skies
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A rose he gave
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Yet so much more
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~Alee...25.6.00~
---Anonymous


Commentary:
a rose given holds so much. nicely done. ms
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for me the last four lines really make this poem. well done...fallon
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thank you ms and fallon..appreciate your comments..thanks for taking the time to read it......Alee
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