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I want to stitch these words,
my silken thread,
piercing your secret heart,
making you quiver
with just a touch
rolled off the tongue
into your listening ears.
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I want to write poetry
in the dark,
your smoothest skin
papyrus for this cryptic tongue
used by lovers dead
and bearded bards
of forgotten songs.
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I only want you
where virgins swoon,
paled under moon,
ghastly by firelight,
twisted shadows intwined in night
caught in the dark webs
left by negligent sun.
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P.M.David
Sorry folks it's kind of sappy. Comments/Suggestions?
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kinda sappy, true...but well poemed all the same. *grace
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NOTHING WRONG WITH SAPPINESS, THIS IS GOOD AND HEART FELT. YET ANOTHER GOOD ONE. INZANE
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I think heartfelt is the word for it not sappy...well written! m.e.
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PMD-love the first three lines. i think we all wish we could express our
feelings like that.Csmith
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mmmmm.....sexy.....nice poem. sunlight