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Poem Number 15593
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Sane~


Commentary:
I'm here~
Near~
to you
and Liquid
mirrors
Flashing
steamy
hot and
charcoal
Black~
piled high
in a stack~
don't look
Back~
to late
for that
with heat like
This~
to easy
to miss..~
my
Kiss...~
upon
your forehead
landing
Soft~
as angels
in a
Loft~
between our
bedposts
like firelight
caught
in
a starfilled
Night~
when lovers
Meet
with frozen
Lips~
curving
hands upon
her
Hips~
that glide
with
Grace~
shown to a
little child's
tear worn
Face~
of a dead
man's pain...
as much alive
as i
am
Sane.
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)Glow
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when lovers meet with frozen lips....as much alive as i am sane.
wonderful lines, Glow, and seductive rhythm.
flicker
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Boring!

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thanks, i enjoy it too:)
)Kaleb
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Kaleb, it looks as though Grumpy chose Sunday to visit,lol. 'a'
nice poem Kaleb:-)
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