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Poem Number 15568
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Ten, nine, eight….one…zero…
Ricochet most wildly
Aerodynamically disinclined
Mirages of clouds
Play with my assent
Orbit imploded stars
List my knowing direction
Indiscreet legs writhe
Neglectful of graceful descent
Elbows deep in elastic tarp
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I read this poem many times and finaally noticed its about a trampline. Kewl....Moe
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Which Moe are you? - Moe (the regular one)
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hahah moe....yes hon...a TRAMPOLINE...written for my son :)
at least he thinks i'm cool ~gigglz~
~haizey
p.s. isn't asking moe if he/she is regular a bit personal? ~eg~
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