A kiss in bloom

"A Kiss in Bloom"
`
When I feel your
soft lips upon mine, I
feel our oneness
burn with the fire of
ripening love.
`
With increased desire,
love's richness blossoms,
and bursts forth into
fullness of bud;
hovering on the brink
of blossoming into
full bloom.
`
Your eyes closed, you
relish my mouth with
your kiss, as I also devour
the sweetness of yours.
`
Lost and harnessed
in the clutch of love's
deepest emotion,
we unleash the petals
of love's sweet flower;
they open one by one
in the sunshine of our
passion, until the radiance
of full bloomed beauty
shines forth;
releasing love's own
sweet fragrance.
`
`
audee

-------
Wow! :) Lovely thoughts audee. You always write beautifully. Thanks. sa
-------
'a', you sure can paint a perfect picture of passion! :) '42'
-------
Ah, yes, you know what i think of this one Audee. On third read i'm seeing Georgia O'Keefe paintings and Rodin sculptures and Italian Cinema, think i'll take a break...fallon
-------
and "oh wow!" back to you three for your lovely comments, sa, 42 and fallon, I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. Now and again I like to have a romp with a little passion in poetry writing, it's the only way I can "flex my wings", so to speak, :-):-) ~audee.
-------
Really. You have not talent Audee. I don't know why you write poetry, but if you must write it, why do you put it out for people to read?
-------
this is simply lovely, audee... *grace (see how envy rears its ugly head? hey grumpy, in the words of 4 year old dillon, "ugly begins with U" ) :)
-------
LOL at dear old Grumpy (alias "Anon Special" She never fails her dutiful attentions upon my works. I luv ya Grumps, I can always rely on you to let me know if my work is okay..... and if it rouses your spite then I know I'm doing okay.Thanks Grumpy dear, may the world be kind to you too.:-) ~audee
(only thing is you don't come back in time to read the answers you arouse)
-------
Thanks Grace, :-):-) ~ audee
-------
Only thing is Anon Special, I miss your nice poetry, why don't you post poems, ( I don't miss Yolanda much but I do miss your other poems).With the time it took you to post the above comment, you could have had a poem posted. But I guess you wont be through again until next Friday or Saturday, so you wont get to read this. ~ audee
-------
closed by audee