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Poem Number 15556
HELL


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A treacherous evening
Boredom brought darkness & grief
Laziness creeping in like thousand thorns
Tentacles of dark memories
suffocating to squeeze what left of life
Red ugly shapes on the Screen
Dancing silhouttes of death
Waving guns, the war is on
change of switch brought death again
creatures dying of flood
closer look proved they were men
a baby is being born amidts death and misery
cattle and men frozen in natures rage
a six year killing another of same age
men stabbing each other in Gods name
Nations bombing to stregthen their faiths
leaders conniving to earn their votes
claiming their virtues from rooftops
hell, filled , relocated to earth so early
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JD
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i know. heartbreaking. poetry helps deal with the insanity. thanks.
flicker
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such sad stark realities. the last line says it all. good job...ms
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